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“Stride-Lite Shoes: The Comfort Test” (company web page)
Author: Brenna Quill, a marketing writer for Stride-Lite Shoes. Container: Stride-Lite Stories. Publisher: Stride-Lite Shoes. Date: 2 March 2025. Found at: stridelite.example/comfort.
[1] Stride-Lite Shoes asked 24 volunteers to wear its new Cloud Walker sneaker for two weeks of ordinary days, including walks to school and trips to the store. [2] At the end of the two weeks, each volunteer filled out a short form about how the shoes had felt. [3] Twenty of the 24 volunteers said that the shoes felt very comfortable.[4] The company ran the test itself in its own office, and no volunteer wore a different brand for comparison. [5] The volunteers were chosen from the company's customer mailing list. [6] “Twenty out of twenty-four is a clear win,” said Odell Tamsin, the company's product manager.
[7] Comfort is hard to measure, so the form simply asked volunteers to circle a number from one to five. [8] The company printed the forms but did not hire anyone outside the company to read or score them. [9] Independent testers have not yet reviewed the results. [10] The company says more tests will follow next year, and the Cloud Walker is on sale now in three colors.
Draft paragraph by Kira: (A) Comfort matters to anyone who walks a lot. (B) I think the Cloud Walker looks too bright for my taste. (C) In the company's test, 20 of 24 volunteers said the shoe felt very comfortable. (D) According to Brenna Quill, a marketing writer, the company ran the test in its own office.Kira drafted a paragraph using the page. Which sentence still needs a credit?
- Sentence B: it says something about the shoe, so it must have come from the page and needs a credit.
- Sentence A: it states a fact, and facts need a credit.
- Sentence C: it gives a count from the company's test, and the count came from the page.
- Sentence D: it uses the page's information, so it needs a credit.
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“Stride-Lite Shoes: The Comfort Test” (company web page)
Author: Brenna Quill, a marketing writer for Stride-Lite Shoes. Container: Stride-Lite Stories. Publisher: Stride-Lite Shoes. Date: 2 March 2025. Found at: stridelite.example/comfort.
[1] Stride-Lite Shoes asked 24 volunteers to wear its new Cloud Walker sneaker for two weeks of ordinary days, including walks to school and trips to the store. [2] At the end of the two weeks, each volunteer filled out a short form about how the shoes had felt. [3] Twenty of the 24 volunteers said that the shoes felt very comfortable.[4] The company ran the test itself in its own office, and no volunteer wore a different brand for comparison. [5] The volunteers were chosen from the company's customer mailing list. [6] “Twenty out of twenty-four is a clear win,” said Odell Tamsin, the company's product manager.
[7] Comfort is hard to measure, so the form simply asked volunteers to circle a number from one to five. [8] The company printed the forms but did not hire anyone outside the company to read or score them. [9] Independent testers have not yet reviewed the results. [10] The company says more tests will follow next year, and the Cloud Walker is on sale now in three colors.
Draft note card by Zee:
Quote or paraphrase? Quote.
Note: Brenna Quill, a marketing writer, writes that the company ran the test itself in its own office, and no volunteer wore a different brand for comparison.
Citation: Quill, Brenna. “Stride-Lite Shoes: The Comfort Test.” Stride-Lite Stories, Stride-Lite Shoes, 2 March 2025, stridelite.example/comfort.One line of Zee's draft note card has a problem. Which repair fixes it without breaking anything else?
- Change the first line to Paraphrase, and leave the Note as it is.
- Change the Citation to put the date before the container, so the date is easier to find.
- Put quotation marks around all the copied words after writes that, and keep the first line as Quote.
- Put quotation marks around only the last words, no volunteer wore a different brand for comparison, and leave the rest.
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“Harbor Gate Garage: Easing Downtown Parking” (company web page)
Author: Marcus Ehlers, a communications manager for Harbor Gate Development. Container: Harbor Gate News. Publisher: Harbor Gate Development. Date: 17 November 2025. Found at: harborgate.example/garage.
[1] Downtown Harbor Gate is running out of places to park, and the new Harbor Gate Garage is meant to fix that. [2] The garage will have 600 spaces on four levels, and it will open next September on Wells Street. [3] To plan it, the company hired a traffic consultant, who watched 12 downtown blocks on three weekday afternoons.[4] The consultant saw an average of 85 cars circling per hour, looking for a place to stop. [5] The consultant says the new garage should cut that number by about 40 percent. [6] “Drivers will spend less time searching and more time shopping,” said Lena Petrov, who owns the bakery on Wells Street.
[7] The company will charge $2 an hour for parking, with the first twenty minutes free. [8] The garage includes 40 spaces with chargers for electric cars. [9] Construction begins in January and is expected to take nine months. [10] Harbor Gate Development has built three other garages in the county, and tours of the finished garage will be offered in October.
Draft paragraph by Tala: (A) Harbor Gate Development says its consultant counted 85 cars circling per hour. (B) The garage will have 600 spaces on four levels. (C) Most people dislike searching for a parking space. (D) I would rather walk downtown than drive there.Tala drafted a paragraph using the page. Which sentence still needs a credit?
- Sentence D: it is about getting downtown, so it must have come from the page.
- Sentence B: it gives a number of spaces, and the number came from the page.
- Sentence A: it uses the page's count, so it needs a credit.
- Sentence C: it states a fact, and facts need a credit.
Source A
“Harbor Gate Garage: Easing Downtown Parking” (company web page)
Author: Marcus Ehlers, a communications manager for Harbor Gate Development. Container: Harbor Gate News. Publisher: Harbor Gate Development. Date: 17 November 2025. Found at: harborgate.example/garage.
[1] Downtown Harbor Gate is running out of places to park, and the new Harbor Gate Garage is meant to fix that. [2] The garage will have 600 spaces on four levels, and it will open next September on Wells Street. [3] To plan it, the company hired a traffic consultant, who watched 12 downtown blocks on three weekday afternoons.[4] The consultant saw an average of 85 cars circling per hour, looking for a place to stop. [5] The consultant says the new garage should cut that number by about 40 percent. [6] “Drivers will spend less time searching and more time shopping,” said Lena Petrov, who owns the bakery on Wells Street.
[7] The company will charge $2 an hour for parking, with the first twenty minutes free. [8] The garage includes 40 spaces with chargers for electric cars. [9] Construction begins in January and is expected to take nine months. [10] Harbor Gate Development has built three other garages in the county, and tours of the finished garage will be offered in October.
Source B: news item “Downtown Garage Could Cut Circling by 40 Percent,” by Hugo Brandt, a reporter. Harbor Gate Herald, 19 November 2025. It reports the 40 percent figure and says it comes from the developer's consultant. It has been shared 2,500 times.Source B gives the same 40 percent figure as Source A. Ren wonders whether the match shows the figure is accurate. What is the best answer?
- No. Source B is a news item, and a news item cannot confirm anything about a developer's plan.
- Yes. Source B and Source A give the same 40 percent figure, so two writers have now confirmed the figure between them.
- Yes. Source B is newer, so it has updated Source A's figure with a fresh check.
- No. Source B took its figure from the developer's consultant, the same origin as Source A; look for a study by someone else.
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“Why the Ridge Trail Is Closed Until July” (park notice)
Author: Sofia Ardent, a park ranger. Container: Pinecrest Trail Notices. Publisher: Pinecrest State Park. Date: 1 April 2025. Found at: pinecrestpark.example/ridge.
[1] The Ridge Trail at Pinecrest State Park closed on 1 April and will stay closed until 15 July. [2] Each spring, several kinds of birds build nests directly on the ground along the trail's open ridge. [3] Hikers who walk close to a nest can frighten the parent birds away, and the eggs may grow cold.[4] Rangers walked the ridge in March with a measuring wheel and marked 17 nests in a stretch only 0.8 miles long. [5] Last year, before the closure, rangers found 11 nests along the same stretch. [6] The park chose the closing dates by looking at the records from the past six springs, when the last chicks left their nests in the first week of July.
[7] “We would rather close the trail for a season than lose a whole generation of chicks,” said Camille Reyes, a volunteer who monitors the nests. [8] The closure does not affect the Valley Loop, which stays open all year. [9] Hikers can still reach the lookout by taking the Valley Loop and the Fern Road trail. [10] Rangers will check the ridge each week and post updates on the park's notice page. [11] The Ridge Trail will reopen on 15 July if no nests are active.
Draft paragraph by Noah: (A) Birds build nests in many different places. (B) Rangers marked 17 nests along part of the Ridge Trail this spring. (C) I think the trail should reopen sooner, because I love hiking up there. (D) According to Sofia Ardent, a park ranger, the closure ends on 15 July.Noah drafted a paragraph using the notice. Which sentence still needs a credit?
- Sentence B: it gives a nest count, and the count came from the notice.
- Sentence A: it states a fact, and facts need a credit.
- Sentence C: it is about the trail, so it must have come from the notice.
- Sentence D: it uses the notice's information, so it needs a credit.
Source A
“Why the Ridge Trail Is Closed Until July” (park notice)
Author: Sofia Ardent, a park ranger. Container: Pinecrest Trail Notices. Publisher: Pinecrest State Park. Date: 1 April 2025. Found at: pinecrestpark.example/ridge.
[1] The Ridge Trail at Pinecrest State Park closed on 1 April and will stay closed until 15 July. [2] Each spring, several kinds of birds build nests directly on the ground along the trail's open ridge. [3] Hikers who walk close to a nest can frighten the parent birds away, and the eggs may grow cold.[4] Rangers walked the ridge in March with a measuring wheel and marked 17 nests in a stretch only 0.8 miles long. [5] Last year, before the closure, rangers found 11 nests along the same stretch. [6] The park chose the closing dates by looking at the records from the past six springs, when the last chicks left their nests in the first week of July.
[7] “We would rather close the trail for a season than lose a whole generation of chicks,” said Camille Reyes, a volunteer who monitors the nests. [8] The closure does not affect the Valley Loop, which stays open all year. [9] Hikers can still reach the lookout by taking the Valley Loop and the Fern Road trail. [10] Rangers will check the ridge each week and post updates on the park's notice page. [11] The Ridge Trail will reopen on 15 July if no nests are active.
Source B: web page “Bird Club Walks the Ridge,” by Gil Fenner, a Pinecrest Bird Club volunteer. Pinecrest Bird Club Notes, 28 March 2025. It says the club walked the same 0.8-mile stretch of the Ridge Trail on its own in March and marked 17 nests, and it does not mention the park's notice. It has been shared 2,000 times.Source B gives the same nest count as Source A. Milo wonders whether the match shows the count is accurate. What is the best answer?
- Yes. Source B is newer, so its count replaces the notice's count.
- No. The two counts match exactly, so Source B must have copied the notice.
- No. Source B is a club page, and that kind of page cannot confirm a park's count.
- Yes. Source B made its own count on the same stretch, so two separate counts agree.
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“Why the Ridge Trail Is Closed Until July” (park notice)
Author: Sofia Ardent, a park ranger. Container: Pinecrest Trail Notices. Publisher: Pinecrest State Park. Date: 1 April 2025. Found at: pinecrestpark.example/ridge.
[1] The Ridge Trail at Pinecrest State Park closed on 1 April and will stay closed until 15 July. [2] Each spring, several kinds of birds build nests directly on the ground along the trail's open ridge. [3] Hikers who walk close to a nest can frighten the parent birds away, and the eggs may grow cold.[4] Rangers walked the ridge in March with a measuring wheel and marked 17 nests in a stretch only 0.8 miles long. [5] Last year, before the closure, rangers found 11 nests along the same stretch. [6] The park chose the closing dates by looking at the records from the past six springs, when the last chicks left their nests in the first week of July.
[7] “We would rather close the trail for a season than lose a whole generation of chicks,” said Camille Reyes, a volunteer who monitors the nests. [8] The closure does not affect the Valley Loop, which stays open all year. [9] Hikers can still reach the lookout by taking the Valley Loop and the Fern Road trail. [10] Rangers will check the ridge each week and post updates on the park's notice page. [11] The Ridge Trail will reopen on 15 July if no nests are active.
Draft note card by Jun:
Quote or paraphrase? Quote.
Note: “We would rather close the trail for a season than lose a whole generation of chicks.”
Credit line: According to Sofia Ardent, a park ranger, “We would rather close the trail for a season than lose a whole generation of chicks.”
Citation: Ardent, Sofia. “Why the Ridge Trail Is Closed Until July.” Pinecrest Trail Notices, Pinecrest State Park, 1 April 2025, pinecrestpark.example/ridge.One line of Jun's draft note card has a problem. Which repair fixes it without breaking anything else?
- Change the Credit line to name Camille Reyes, a volunteer who monitors the nests, and keep the quotation marks.
- Change the Citation to list Camille Reyes as the author, since her words are the ones being quoted in the notice.
- Change the Credit line to name Camille Reyes, and drop the job so that the line is short.
- Change the Citation to put the date before the container, so the date is easier to find and read.
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“Is the Old Oak on Maple Court Safe?” (neighborhood newsletter article)
Author: Greta Lindqvist, the Gazette's editor. Container: Maple Court Gazette. Publisher: Maple Court Neighborhood Association. Date: 9 September 2025. Found at: maplecourt.example/oak.
[1] The white oak at the end of Maple Court is about 140 years old, and its branches shade most of the street. [2] After a limb fell in August, neighbors asked whether the tree was safe, so the neighborhood association hired a certified arborist. [3] The arborist, Walter Penhallow, spent two mornings examining the oak from the ground and from a lift. [4] He tapped the trunk with a mallet and used a thin drill to measure the wood inside.[5] The drill showed solid wood around the whole trunk, with one hollow pocket about the size of a grapefruit near the base. [6] The fallen limb had a brittle, hollow center, which is common in older branches. [7] Penhallow recommends removing the dry limbs and checking the tree again in two years. [8] He does not recommend cutting down the tree.
[9] “A tree like this is worth keeping if the trunk is sound, and this trunk is sound,” said Rosalind Achebe, the association's president. [10] The association will vote on the pruning plan at its October meeting. [11] The pruning would cost about $2,400, paid from the association's yearly fund.
Draft paragraph by Esme: (A) Old trees often have dry limbs. (B) According to Walter Penhallow, a certified arborist, the trunk is solid. (C) I hope the neighborhood keeps the tree. (D) The pruning would cost about $2,400.Esme drafted a paragraph using the article. Which sentence still needs a credit?
- Sentence B: it uses the article's information, so it needs a credit.
- Sentence C: it is about the tree, so it must have come from the article.
- Sentence D: it gives a cost, and the cost came from the article.
- Sentence A: it states a fact, and facts need a credit.
Source A
“Is the Old Oak on Maple Court Safe?” (neighborhood newsletter article)
Author: Greta Lindqvist, the Gazette's editor. Container: Maple Court Gazette. Publisher: Maple Court Neighborhood Association. Date: 9 September 2025. Found at: maplecourt.example/oak.
[1] The white oak at the end of Maple Court is about 140 years old, and its branches shade most of the street. [2] After a limb fell in August, neighbors asked whether the tree was safe, so the neighborhood association hired a certified arborist. [3] The arborist, Walter Penhallow, spent two mornings examining the oak from the ground and from a lift. [4] He tapped the trunk with a mallet and used a thin drill to measure the wood inside.[5] The drill showed solid wood around the whole trunk, with one hollow pocket about the size of a grapefruit near the base. [6] The fallen limb had a brittle, hollow center, which is common in older branches. [7] Penhallow recommends removing the dry limbs and checking the tree again in two years. [8] He does not recommend cutting down the tree.
[9] “A tree like this is worth keeping if the trunk is sound, and this trunk is sound,” said Rosalind Achebe, the association's president. [10] The association will vote on the pruning plan at its October meeting. [11] The pruning would cost about $2,400, paid from the association's yearly fund.
Source B: web page “Maple Court Oak: Safe or Not?” by Darla Winn, a neighbor. Maple Court Chatter, 12 September 2025. It says a second certified arborist, hired by the neighbor's family, drilled the trunk on a different day and found it solid all around. It does not mention the Gazette article. It has been shared 1,200 times.Source B gives the same finding as Source A. Bo wonders whether the match shows the finding is accurate. What is the best answer?
- No. Source B was written by a neighbor, and a neighbor cannot confirm what an arborist found.
- Yes. Source B is newer, so its finding replaces the Gazette's finding.
- Yes. Source B reports a second arborist's own drilling, so two separate inspections agree.
- No. Both pages say the trunk is solid, so Source B must have copied the Gazette.
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“Is the Old Oak on Maple Court Safe?” (neighborhood newsletter article)
Author: Greta Lindqvist, the Gazette's editor. Container: Maple Court Gazette. Publisher: Maple Court Neighborhood Association. Date: 9 September 2025. Found at: maplecourt.example/oak.
[1] The white oak at the end of Maple Court is about 140 years old, and its branches shade most of the street. [2] After a limb fell in August, neighbors asked whether the tree was safe, so the neighborhood association hired a certified arborist. [3] The arborist, Walter Penhallow, spent two mornings examining the oak from the ground and from a lift. [4] He tapped the trunk with a mallet and used a thin drill to measure the wood inside.[5] The drill showed solid wood around the whole trunk, with one hollow pocket about the size of a grapefruit near the base. [6] The fallen limb had a brittle, hollow center, which is common in older branches. [7] Penhallow recommends removing the dry limbs and checking the tree again in two years. [8] He does not recommend cutting down the tree.
[9] “A tree like this is worth keeping if the trunk is sound, and this trunk is sound,” said Rosalind Achebe, the association's president. [10] The association will vote on the pruning plan at its October meeting. [11] The pruning would cost about $2,400, paid from the association's yearly fund.
Draft note card by Ari:
Quote or paraphrase? Paraphrase.
Note: The drill showed solid wood around the whole trunk, with one hollow pocket about the size of a grapefruit near the base.
Credit line: Greta Lindqvist, the Gazette's editor, reports that
Citation: Lindqvist, Greta. “Is the Old Oak on Maple Court Safe?” Maple Court Gazette, Maple Court Neighborhood Association, 9 September 2025, maplecourt.example/oak.One line of Ari's draft note card has a problem. Which repair fixes it without breaking anything else?
- Rewrite the Note in new words and a new shape that keeps the solid trunk and the small hollow, and keep the label Paraphrase.
- Change the Citation to put Lindqvist's first name first, so the author is easier to find.
- Change the label to Quote and leave the Note as it is, since the words match the article exactly.
- Swap showed for revealed and around for throughout in the Note.