The message of a poem, line by line
Grade 8 Reading Worksheet

Circle the best answer.
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Rewriting the Letter (original poem)
Stanza 1
[1] Draft one: “Sorry you were upset.”
[2] I read it twice. It sounds like weather,
[3] something that happened to us both,
[4] and I crumple it into a tidy ball.Stanza 2
[5] Draft two: “I'm sorry, but the bus was late,
[6] and you know how the group chat gets.”
[7] That little “but” sits in the middle like a stone.
[8] I tear the page along its folded edge.Stanza 3
[9] Draft three is slow. I cross out every excuse.
[10] “I told Tala your secret. I thought it was funny.
[11] It wasn't. You trusted me, and I laughed.”
[12] My hand feels heavy, but the words stay put.Stanza 4
[13] This one I fold and slide beneath the door
[14] before I can decide to take it back.
[15] It is the hardest of the three to write,
[16] and the first one that doesn't sound like someone else.
Annotations: stanza 1 = the first try; stanza 2 = the second try; stanza 3 = the third try; stanza 4 = the delivery.Jun looks for the change in the drafts. All four lines are true. Which line proves this most strongly: “By the third draft, the speaker admits the secret broke the friend's trust”?
- [10] “I told Tala your secret. I thought it was funny.
- [11] It wasn't. You trusted me, and I laughed.”
- [3] something that happened to us both,
- [15] It is the hardest of the three to write,
Luz looks at where the poem ends: a letter slid beneath a door. Which theme links that ending to the poem's message?
- The first draft sounds like weather because it treats the trouble as something that happened to both friends.
- Saying what really happened takes nerve, and it is the version that finally sounds like the speaker's own voice.
- Writing a letter several times before sending it is the safest way to say sorry to a friend.
- The speaker folds the last draft and slides it beneath a door before there is time to take it back.
Milo looks for how the speaker feels about the second draft. All four lines are true. Which line proves this most strongly: “The speaker feels the excuse in draft two as a weight”?
- [12] My hand feels heavy, but the words stay put.
- [4] and I crumple it into a tidy ball.
- [7] That little “but” sits in the middle like a stone.
- [5] Draft two: “I'm sorry, but the bus was late,
Noah marks the weather comparison, the stone and the ending. Which theme shows how the speaker's sense of a good apology develops?
- A good apology is judged less by how smooth it sounds than by whether the speaker can stand behind every word.
- An apology that names the harm will be forgiven right away, so the speaker no longer needs to worry.
- A good apology should sound as smooth as possible, so the speaker is right to polish each draft further.
- Calling trouble something that happened to both friends makes a problem feel lighter, as the first draft shows.
Attic Inventory (original poem)
Stanza 1
[1] Grandpa's attic holds an inventory:
[2] three lamps without a plug, a trunk of maps,
[3] a clock that stopped at ten past two, a coat
[4] that smells like cedar and some distant rain.Stanza 2
[5] The plan is simple: keep, donate, toss.
[6] I make three piles and feel just like a judge,
[7] until the toss pile fills with what was cheap:
[8] a bent spoon, a cracked mug, a whistle that won't blow.Stanza 3
[9] I hold the whistle up. “Where did this come from?”
[10] Grandpa laughs. And suddenly an hour is gone:
[11] a lake, a broken boat, a borrowed oar,
[12] a summer told in what the pile had saved.Stanza 4
[13] By dark the keep pile fits inside a shoebox.
[14] The toss pile leaves in bags, but not the stories;
[15] I've folded each of those where I can find it.
[16] The attic is an ordinary room again.
Annotations: stanza 1 = the inventory; stanza 2 = the sorting; stanza 3 = the stories; stanza 4 = what is kept.Pia thinks about the speaker's situation: sorting a grandparent's attic into three piles. Which theme links that situation to the poem's message?
- An old object matters for the story it carries, and the story can be kept after the object is gone.
- A person sorting old things can feel like a judge, deciding what is worth keeping from what looks cheap.
- The speaker sorts a grandparent's attic into keep, donate and toss piles and finishes with a small box.
- Old attics hold more useful things than people expect, so families should check carefully before throwing anything out.
Ren looks for what the toss pile holds. All four lines are true. Which line proves this most strongly: “The cheap things in the toss pile turn out to hold a whole summer”?
- [8] a bent spoon, a cracked mug, a whistle that won't blow.
- [12] a summer told in what the pile had saved.
- [14] The toss pile leaves in bags, but not the stories;
- [10] Grandpa laughs. And suddenly an hour is gone:
Tala follows the sorting from stanza 2 to stanza 4. Which theme includes how the speaker's idea of worth changes?
- Worth moves from how an object looks to the stories it holds, and stories can stay when the object goes.
- Worth moves from the stories an object holds to how it looks, so the speaker keeps the things that look valuable.
- Stories about old objects are how families are remembered, so the family should keep the whole attic.
- Judging objects as keep, donate or toss makes a person feel powerful, like a judge in a courtroom.
Zee thinks about the ending: an ordinary room at the end of a long day. Which theme links that ending to the poem's message?
- The speaker finishes sorting, fills a shoebox and bags the toss pile, so the attic is just a room again.
- An attic full of lamps without plugs and clocks that stopped can look strange before anyone has sorted it.
- A room can go back to being ordinary because what made it special was the stories, not the room itself.
- Ending a big job at dark shows that careful planning, with three clear piles, makes any cleanup easy.
Ari looks at what leaves the attic. All four lines are true. Which line proves this most strongly: “The objects leave the attic, but the stories do not”?
- [11] a lake, a broken boat, a borrowed oar,
- [15] I've folded each of those where I can find it.
- [14] The toss pile leaves in bags, but not the stories;
- [13] By dark the keep pile fits inside a shoebox.
Bo marks the three piles, the whistle and the shoebox. Which theme shows how the speaker's view changes as the sorting goes on?
- A person who begins by judging objects can end by keeping the stories that give the objects their worth.
- A person who begins by keeping stories can end by judging objects, which makes the sorting feel colder.
- Old objects that look cheap or broken, such as a bent spoon, can be thrown out without a second thought.
- Grandparents tell the truest stories, so a family should ask them about each object before sorting.