Worksheet

Add Details to a Story

Grade 1 - Writing - Challenge Me

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  1. Which revision adds a useful detail to “I opened the box.”?

    • I slowly opened the tiny box.
    • The box was a box.
    • I opened the box.

  2. What information strengthens “Cold rain tapped the window.”?

    • a page number
    • sound and feeling
    • an unrelated fact

  3. Which sentence gives the clearest picture of the event “The bird landed.”?

    • The small bird landed softly on a snowy branch.
    • The bird was a bird.
    • It landed somewhere.

  4. Why is “The child laughed at the silly puppet.” stronger than the plain version?

    • it repeats each word
    • it helps readers picture it
    • it changes the event

  5. Rewrite “The child laughed.” with one detail about reason.

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