Worksheet

Add Details to a Story

Grade 1 - Writing - Building Confidence

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  1. Which revision adds a useful detail to “Rain fell.”?

    • Rain fell.
    • Rain was weather.
    • Cold rain tapped the window.

  2. What information strengthens “Cold rain tapped the window.”?

    • a page number
    • an unrelated fact
    • sound and feeling

  3. Which sentence gives the clearest picture of the event “I opened the box.”?

    • I slowly opened the tiny box.
    • Something happened.
    • The box was a box.

  4. Why is “I slowly opened the tiny box.” stronger than the plain version?

    • it uses more periods
    • it changes the event
    • it helps readers picture it

  5. Rewrite “Rain fell.” with one detail about sound and feeling.

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