Worksheet

Revise for Clarity

Grade 2 - Writing - Challenge Me

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  1. Which revision makes this sentence clearer: "The animal did something."

    • The sentence is a sentence.
    • It was good and nice.
    • Something happened there.
    • The rabbit hopped under the fence and hid in the grass.

  2. Replace the vague word in "The teacher gave us things." Which revision is more exact?

    • It was done by someone.
    • The teacher gave us things.
    • The teacher gave us rulers and graph paper.
    • The stuff was nice.

  3. Which revision removes repeated words from "Ben checked the map and Ben folded the map carefully."

    • It happened and it happened.
    • The same words are the same words.
    • Ben checked the map and folded it carefully.
    • Ben checked the map and Ben folded the map carefully.

  4. The sentence is a run-on: "Rain started we opened umbrellas." Which revision is easier to read?

    • The sentence keeps going and going.
    • Rain started. We opened umbrellas.
    • Because the two ideas.
    • Rain started we opened umbrellas.

  5. Which transition makes the steps clearer? First, I folded the paper. ___, I wrote the message.

    • Maybe
    • Purple
    • Then
    • Under
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