Worksheet

Revise for Clarity

Grade 2 - Writing - On Level

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  1. Which revision makes this sentence clearer: "The dog got the thing."

    • It was good and nice.
    • The sentence is a sentence.
    • The dog got the thing.
    • The dog carried the red ball to Max.

  2. Replace the vague word in "Nia looked at the thing on the chart." Which revision is more exact?

    • It was done by someone.
    • Nia looked at the thing on the chart.
    • Nia looked at the rainfall number on the chart.
    • The stuff was nice.

  3. Which revision removes repeated words from "The writer added a fact and the writer checked the fact."

    • The animal did something.
    • The writer added a fact and the writer checked the fact.
    • The writer added a fact and checked it.
    • It happened and it happened.

  4. The sentence is a run-on: "The wind pushed the door it banged against the wall." Which revision is easier to read?

    • The wind pushed the door it banged against the wall.
    • Because the two ideas.
    • The wind pushed the door. It banged against the wall.
    • The sentence keeps going and going.

  5. Which transition makes the steps clearer? I measured the bridge. ___, I tested it with blocks.

    • Under
    • Purple
    • Next
    • Because of
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