Worksheet

Revise for Clarity

Grade 2 - Writing - Building Confidence

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  1. Which revision makes this sentence clearer: "He went over there."

    • The sentence is a sentence.
    • He went over there.
    • Leo walked to the blue table by the window.
    • Something happened there.

  2. Replace the vague word in "The teacher gave us things." Which revision is more exact?

    • The teacher gave us rulers and graph paper.
    • The things were in the place.
    • It was done by someone.
    • The teacher gave us things.

  3. Which revision removes repeated words from "Nora opened the box and Nora took out the markers."

    • Nora opened the box and took out the markers.
    • It happened and it happened.
    • Nora opened the box and Nora took out the markers.
    • He went over there.

  4. The sentence is a run-on: "Rain started we opened umbrellas." Which revision is easier to read?

    • The sentence keeps going and going.
    • Rain started. We opened umbrellas.
    • Rain started we opened umbrellas.
    • Because the two ideas.

  5. Which transition makes the steps clearer? I washed the apple. ___, I sliced it.

    • Because of
    • Purple
    • Next
    • Under
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