Revise and Edit

Grade 3 - Writing - Challenge Me

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  1. Which Grade 3 revision makes this vague draft clearer: "The plan helped people."

    • It was good and nice.
    • The survey helped Ravi's group order extra fruit cups for the market.
    • The sentence is a sentence.
    • Something happened there.
  2. Which revision replaces the vague word in "Sienna fixed the stuff on the rover." with exact information?

    • The stuff was nice.
    • It was done by someone.
    • Sienna fixed the stuff on the rover.
    • Sienna tightened the loose axle on the rover.
  3. Which edit removes repeated wording from this Grade 3 sentence: "Malik sorted the cards and Malik practiced the speech."

    • The same words are the same words.
    • The boy talked about his idea.
    • Malik sorted the cards and practiced the speech.
    • It happened and it happened.
  4. This draft has a run-on: "The tide rose the pool disappeared under waves." Which revision separates the ideas clearly?

    • The sentence keeps going and going.
    • Because the two ideas.
    • The tide rose. The pool disappeared under waves.
    • The animal moved in the water.
  5. Which transition best connects the Grade 3 revision steps? First, Ravi counted the votes. ___, the group ordered supplies.

    • After comparing
    • Because of
    • Under
    • Maybe
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