Revise and Edit
Grade 3 - Writing - Challenge Me

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Which Grade 3 revision makes this vague draft clearer: "The plan helped people."
- It was good and nice.
- The survey helped Ravi's group order extra fruit cups for the market.
- The sentence is a sentence.
- Something happened there.
Which revision replaces the vague word in "Sienna fixed the stuff on the rover." with exact information?
- The stuff was nice.
- It was done by someone.
- Sienna fixed the stuff on the rover.
- Sienna tightened the loose axle on the rover.
Which edit removes repeated wording from this Grade 3 sentence: "Malik sorted the cards and Malik practiced the speech."
- The same words are the same words.
- The boy talked about his idea.
- Malik sorted the cards and practiced the speech.
- It happened and it happened.
This draft has a run-on: "The tide rose the pool disappeared under waves." Which revision separates the ideas clearly?
- The sentence keeps going and going.
- Because the two ideas.
- The tide rose. The pool disappeared under waves.
- The animal moved in the water.
Which transition best connects the Grade 3 revision steps? First, Ravi counted the votes. ___, the group ordered supplies.
- After comparing
- Because of
- Under
- Maybe