Worksheet

Revise and Edit

Grade 3 - Writing - On Level

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  1. Which Grade 3 revision makes this vague draft clearer: "The place had many old things."

    • The place had many old things.
    • The sentence is a sentence.
    • The museum storage room held labeled fossil trays and dusty map tubes.
    • Something happened there.

  2. Which revision replaces the vague word in "Sienna fixed the stuff on the rover." with exact information?

    • Sienna fixed the stuff on the rover.
    • The things were in the place.
    • Sienna tightened the loose axle on the rover.
    • It was done by someone.

  3. Which edit removes repeated wording from this Grade 3 sentence: "Harper found the label and Harper placed the label beside the fossil."

    • Harper found the label and Harper placed the label beside the fossil.
    • The same words are the same words.
    • The place had many old things.
    • Harper found the label and placed it beside the fossil.

  4. This draft has a run-on: "The tide rose the pool disappeared under waves." Which revision separates the ideas clearly?

    • Because the two ideas.
    • The animal moved in the water.
    • The tide rose. The pool disappeared under waves.
    • The sentence keeps going and going.

  5. Which transition best connects the Grade 3 revision steps? First, Harper checked the tray. ___, she searched behind the shelf.

    • Maybe
    • Purple
    • Next
    • Under
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