Combine Choppy Sentences
Grade 5 - Writing - On Level

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Combine these choppy sentences: The announcement named the club. The announcement gave the meeting time.
- The class planted beans and measured the sprouts each Friday.
- The announcement named the club and gave the meeting time.
- The bins need labels that include pictures.
- Students can build models and test their ideas.
Which pair of sentences should be combined because the ideas are closely related?
- Students can build models. Students can test their ideas.
- The library should add a small makerspace. The library has windows.
- Library Innovation Report, page 4 The project was good.
- I built a model. It failed. I fixed it. Makerspaces often include shared tools, recycled materials, and design challenges.
Which revision avoids a comma splice for this draft about bike lanes?
- The park road is busy, but families still ride there.
- The park road is busy. families still ride there.
- The park road is busy., and, Families still ride there.
- The park road is busy., Families still ride there.
Why is "The exhibit has old maps that show the first train route." smoother in a draft about field trip planning?
- it removes the main idea
- it changes the topic
- it connects related ideas without needless repetition
- it adds an unrelated source
Which conjunction could join two related actions about morning announcements?
- because of
- howevered
- and
- wow