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Revise for Clarity

Grade 2 Writing Worksheet

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Rewrite the sentence. Use a clearer word in place of the word in brackets.

  1. The hungry boy (ate) his sandwich.

  2. The truck (went) down the hill.

  3. The (pretty) flowers filled the garden.

  4. The baby (laughed) at the clown.

  5. He (said) "Wow!" when he saw the gift.

  6. We (got) a puppy from the shelter.

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About this worksheet

Some words are so general that they tell a reader very little. A nice dinner could be anything, and a thing in a tree could be a kite, a bird or a nest. Good writers revise by swapping a vague word for a clearer one, such as delicious dinner or red kite. The reader then sees exactly what the writer saw. This worksheet gives six sentences, each with one vague word in brackets.

The child rewrites the whole sentence on the line, putting a clearer and more exact word where the vague word was. Many answers are right, as long as the new word is more exact and the sentence still makes sense. Ask your child to read the new sentence aloud and ask: can I see it in my mind more clearly now?

What your child will learn

  • Notice a vague word
  • Replace it with a more exact word
  • Keep the rest of the sentence the same

Common Core standard: W.2.5

Worked example

My mom made a (nice) dinner for us. Nice does not say much. A clearer word is delicious: My mom made a delicious dinner for us.

Common mistake

Changing the sentence so much that it no longer says the same thing.

Helpful hint

Ask: what exact word would show what I mean?

Questions parents ask

What is the most common mistake with revise for clarity?

Changing the sentence so much that it no longer says the same thing.

How can I help my child with revise for clarity?

Ask: what exact word would show what I mean?

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