Pace a Narrative
Grade 5 Writing Worksheet

Slow down the moment. Write what the character sees, hears and thinks.
Moment: Maya walks up to the stage to give her speech.
What the character seesWhat the character hearsWhat the character thinks
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Grade 5 Writing Worksheet

Slow down the moment. Write what the character sees, hears and thinks.
Moment: Maya walks up to the stage to give her speech.

Pacing is how fast a story moves. A writer speeds up through the dull parts and slows down at the important moment by adding what the character sees, hears and thinks. On this fifth grade sheet a child gets one important moment from a story and writes what the character sees, hears and thinks on labeled lines.
Each version has a different moment, and the grown-up checks that every line adds a detail to the same moment.
Common Core standard: W.5.3.B
Moment: Leo opens the box. Sees: dust floating in the light. Hears: the lid creaking. Thinks: What could be inside?
Jumping to what happens next instead of staying in the moment.
Picture the moment in slow motion and write what you notice.
Jumping to what happens next instead of staying in the moment.
Picture the moment in slow motion and write what you notice.
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Similar: Narrative Writing
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