Formal or friendly: matching the writing to the reader
Grade 8 Reading Worksheet - Building Confidence
Circle the best answer.
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Books for the Graphic Novel Club (student draft: formal letter)
[1] Dear Ms. Patel, I am writing on behalf of the Graphic Novel Club to request three new series for the school library. [2] Our club has twelve members, and we hang out in the library every Wednesday after school. [3] Several of our favorite series are missing from the shelves, and members must wait for weeks to borrow the few copies that remain.
[4] Honestly, the waiting list is kind of crazy and a total bummer. [5] We have chosen three series that are suitable for readers of all ages and that match the interests of many students. [6] We would be grateful if you could consider our list at your next ordering meeting.
[7] If it would be helpful, a club member can bring the list to your office on Monday morning. [8] We have also prepared a short description of each series and the reasons we chose it. [9] We believe these books would encourage more students to visit the library and to read for pleasure. [10] Thank you for your time and for supporting our reading community.
Ari reads the letter to the librarian and looks for the one sentence that sounds too casual. Which sentence is it?
- Sentence [3], saying some series are missing from the shelves
- Sentence [6], asking Ms. Patel to consider the list
- Sentence [5], about the three series chosen for young and older readers
- Sentence [4], about the waiting list being crazy and a bummer
Esme reads sentence [6] of the letter to the librarian. Which words describe its tone?
- demanding and rude
- silly and joking
- polite and respectful
- bored and careless
Our School Garden Water Test (student draft: science report)
[1] The Science Club planted a vegetable garden behind the gym in April to learn how plants respond to different amounts of water. [2] We divided the garden into three beds and gave each bed a different amount of water each week. [3] Bed A received one liter per plant, bed B received two liters, and bed C received three liters. [4] Every Friday, we measured the height of each plant and recorded the results in a table.
[5] After six weeks, the plants in bed B had grown the tallest, which was totally awesome. [6] The plants in bed C grew more slowly, and a bunch of leaves turned yellow. [7] Too much water can prevent roots from taking in air, so a plant may grow poorly.
[8] Based on these results, we recommend giving each plant about two liters of water per week. [9] Next spring, we plan to repeat the test with a second type of plant to see whether the pattern holds. [10] We would like to thank Mr. Greene for lending us the tools we needed.
Jun reads the garden report and looks for the one sentence that sounds too casual. Which sentence is it?
- Sentence [9], about repeating the test next spring
- Sentence [5], about the totally awesome result in bed B
- Sentence [3], about how much water each bed received
- Sentence [10], thanking Mr. Greene for the tools
Kira thinks “a bunch of” in sentence [6] is too casual for a science report. Which phrase should replace it?
- a whole lot of
- an innumerable multitude of
- very few
- several
Luz reads sentence [8] of the garden report. Which words describe its tone?
- angry and bossy
- careful and objective
- tired and uninterested
- joking and goofy
A Bike Lane for Oak Street (student draft: formal letter)
[1] Dear Mayor Rivera, I am a student at Oak Street Middle School, and I am writing to ask for a protected bike lane on Oak Street. [2] Every morning, dozens of students ride their bikes to school along this busy road, and many more would ride if the road felt safer. [3] Cars often zoom past really close to the riders, and the narrow shoulder gives them almost no room.
[4] Some riders have had close calls already, which is totally nuts. [5] A painted lane with a low barrier would give riders a safe place to travel. [6] Other towns that built similar lanes reported fewer close calls between cars and bikes, and some also saw more riders each month.
[7] A safer road would encourage more students to ride, which would reduce traffic near the school. [8] We understand that the project would cost money, and our class would be glad to help with fundraising and with collecting signatures from neighbors. [9] I would welcome the chance to speak with you about this idea. [10] Thank you very much for your time and attention.
Noah thinks “zoom past really close to” in sentence [3] is too casual for a letter to a mayor. Which phrase should replace it?
- stay far away from
- whip by super close to
- pass very close to
- traverse in extreme proximity to
Pia reads sentence [9] of the letter to the mayor. Which words describe its tone?
- warm and respectful
- pushy and impatient
- playful and teasing
- tired and uninterested
A Class Trip to the Museum (student draft: formal letter)
[1] Dear Director Alvarez, our seventh-grade class would like to visit the Maritime Museum next month as part of our unit on early trade routes. [2] Our teacher, Mr. Brooks, has reviewed the museum's website and believes that the exhibits on early ships match our lessons. [3] Thirty students will attend, along with four grown-ups to keep an eye on everyone. [4] We would like to arrive at ten o'clock and stay until two.
[5] Can you hook us up with a guided tour and some free passes? [6] Our class is raising money to cover the cost of the bus, and we will gladly pay any admission fee. [7] Last year, the sixth-grade class visited the Science Center, and the guides there helped students understand the exhibits.
[8] We believe a guided tour would help our students connect what they read in class to what they see. [9] Please let us know whether the museum can welcome our group on the date we have chosen. [10] We appreciate your time and look forward to your reply.
Ren reads the letter to the museum director and looks for the one sentence that sounds too casual. Which sentence is it?
- Sentence [10], thanking the director and hoping for a reply
- Sentence [4], giving the arrival and leaving times
- Sentence [5], asking the museum to hook us up with free passes
- Sentence [2], about Mr. Brooks reviewing the museum's website
Tala thinks “grown-ups to keep an eye on everyone” in sentence [3] is too casual for a letter to a museum director. Which phrase should replace it?
- younger students
- grown-ups who watch the kids
- adult chaperones
- supervisory personnel of mature years
Zee reads sentence [10] of the letter to the museum director. Which words describe its tone?
- courteous and thankful
- cold and distant
- harsh and blaming
- goofy and giddy
